How to write a research paper introduction
A good introduction is a funnel: it starts broad — why this topic matters — and narrows to one specific thing, your study. The classic recipe is the CARS model: establish the territory, establish the niche (the gap), then occupy it with your aim. Get those three moves in order and the reader arrives at your question feeling it was inevitable.
The three moves (CARS)
- Establish the territory — why the topic matters and what’s already known. Anchor the stakes (scale, significance), ideally with a citation.
- Establish the niche — the gap: what’s missing, unresolved, or contradictory in that knowledge.
- Occupy the niche — your aim, question, or hypothesis, and a sentence on how you address it.
The first sentence
Open with why the topic matters to your field — concretely. Avoid the dictionary definition and the cosmic opener (“Since the dawn of time…”). A specific fact about the scale or cost of the problem, cited, earns attention in a way a broad generalisation never does.
What to keep out
- An exhaustive literature review — that’s the literature review’s job; here you cite selectively to build the gap.
- Results or conclusions — the introduction poses the question; it doesn’t answer it.
- Definitions of common terms, and throat-clearing (“In this paper, I will…” can usually be tightened).
How long?
For a journal article, a few paragraphs — roughly 10–15% of the paper. Long enough for territory, gap, and aim; no longer. It’s the top of the IMRaD structure, mirrored at the end by a discussion that returns to the same gap and shows you filled it.
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Frequently asked questions
How do you structure an introduction?
The funnel / CARS model: establish the territory, establish the niche (the gap), then occupy it with your aim.
What should the first sentence do?
Show why the topic matters — concretely, ideally cited. Skip dictionary definitions and cosmic openers.
Where does the gap go?
It’s the hinge — after what’s known, before your aim. Your aim should answer the gap directly.
How long should it be?
A few paragraphs — roughly 10–15% of the paper. Territory, gap, aim; no exhaustive review.
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